So last month I entered the writing competition over at The Cult Of Me blog, and I was pretty thrilled with my entry. It didn't win, but c'est la vie. I get to shove it one here, and you get to read it anyway. You lucky lucky things. The competition rules were that it had to be no more than 500 words and inspired by this picture:
Will Through Time
I stand on the shore with my feet in the surf and I close my eyes and will the thing back from the past. If I can get this right, if I can just hold it in my mind and not let it slip, I could change history.
This thought makes me wobble. All of a sudden the sea seems incredibly cold
around my feet. Clouds shift to obscure
the sun. There are long shadows and they’re not falling because I have
successfully pulled it forward in time. I have lost concentration and in a moment the
thing will go crashing back through the waves of time and I will have made no
difference at all.
Bardie’s words, unwanted as ever, arrive in my head.
“You can’t change anything. It already happened. If you reach back and change something there
you change EVERYTHING here.”
I remember his impatience.
My dismissal.
“”That’s the point,” I told him, “I want to change
everything.”
He cannot explain to me how vast my mistaken belief is. For once he has no words, only huffs and
squints and the sharp tang of angry disappointment. I know he thinks I should be smarter than
this. I want to tell him that I have
thought about this. If something didn’t
happen then how does it impact on now? What are the new effects that go
rippling through time? Does nothing change? Does everything change? Will the
signal that I hope to remove, the striking sound that starts a small murder
that becomes a massacre, will that be replaced by something else? Stubbornly my only response to this question
is “we’ll find out”.
I know I won’t find out.
I know I won’t be here – none of us will. But I am positive that by wiping clean the
past, whatever present knits itself into being, whatever replaces this weak and
anxious world that we live in, will have to be better. I really don’t see how it can be any worse.
I remember how firm I am in this decision. I send the doubts away, shrugging them off
like a loose coat. They pool around my
feet and are washed away in broken pieces by the tide. I narrow my focus, I send out my thoughts
like two huge hands, reaching back, cupping the cornices of the clock tower, taking
firm hold.
I am only just in time.
I can sense whispers of anticipation nearby. Somewhere a murderer waits breathlessly for
the agreed signal; the clock striking seven.
The mechanisms crank. They are
grinding through time. I heave at the
structure. But I am not just bringing
bricks and mortar, glass and steel, cogs and chains… I am dragging the weight
of this days time. The seconds are
heavy with what should happen next.
Everything moving towards this moment pulls away from me, my fingers
slip. I see a shimmer in the ocean. I
nearly had it. And then the bells in history start dimly to chime.
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